Thursday, August 16, 2012

Success story

CROSS COUNTRY
BY KIERAN!
“Yes!” I thought as I woke up. “Today’s the day for cross-country.”
Once I got dressed in my uniform I packed an energetic lunch and we went to school. Everyone was hyped for the big race.
We walked over to the club grounds lined up in age groups and waited patiently.
Then it was finally time for our race. We lined up… ready… set… GO! We were off. I slipped back early but was gaining fast.
When we were near the end I said to myself ’’Kieran you need to get moving.”
In the end I came fourteenth but that’s pretty good for me!
 

Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Ski trip

My writing group was learning how to add details to a sentence to mak it more interesting for the reader.  This is my work...

I am waiting on the slow magic carpet that takes me to the white world of snow - the Remarkables.