Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Ski trip

My writing group was learning how to add details to a sentence to mak it more interesting for the reader.  This is my work...

I am waiting on the slow magic carpet that takes me to the white world of snow - the Remarkables.

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  1. Room Kokako 2010-2012August 9, 2012 at 2:27 PM

    Fantastic sentence Kieran - you have chosen really suitable descriptive words. - Mrs C/Mum

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