Friday, November 9, 2012

Writing response

AFTER THE HURRICANE – Winslow Homer, 1899
Story by: Kieran
His boat is trashed, munted, OBLITERATED!
The boat was tipped over on its side, only the back of the boat can be seen.
The man is alive but only just; his life is fading but there’s a chance…

1 comment:

  1. A short piece but full of drama Kieran - the first line really lets us know the destruction that has taken place! Your third line really grabs interest and makes us wonder what will happen! - Mum/Mrs C

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